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The aesthetic and concept are good. But you need to leave more time between transitions. I don't have enough time to read the title cards. And you aren't giving the audience time to really absorb what is going on. And when you're working with characters that don't speak, you really need to build that extra time for the audience to take in the visuals and visual cues.

Good start though! Keep it up!

Dragonmaster245 responds:

Thank you for your feedback. I’ll keep it in mind for the future.

Nice rant animation. I might work on the audio though. I can hardly hear it. And that's a bit distracting. Otherwise, nice work!

UrHumanToast responds:

Thank you for your feedback :)
I will use this information!

Holy crap. This is really good. This kind of animation would be on par with that one Arctic Monkeys music video. You should seriously consider making a full music video in this style. I don't know if you have training or not, but you have mad talent.

Chrisso responds:

Hey thanks! You can find the full music video at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63X1PfVQDu0

This is your first animation?? Man this is really good for a first animation. The modeling is great, and I'm impressed with how you animated the characters walking. You clearly have a knack for the nonverbal communication. Not just between the parents, but for the kid when he's thinking of turning back before he goes in. Keep up the good work!

Lyrog responds:

Thank you! I wanted to make as simple models as possible because it doesn't look that bad if i mess something up. I did have some 3D animating experience from before because I used to make Minecraft animations, but there my models were already made. This is my first animation where I made everything myself.

Problem is that it all moves too fast. Plus the fact that the bottom of the island was below the foreground. So I didn't even know if I was watching in reverse or not. That said, the illustration is amazing.

airman4 responds:

The bottom of the island ????

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