Bennitori's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wile Cartoon - Bow-tied Brotherhood]

The aesthetic and concept are good. But you need to leave more time between transitions. I don't have enough time to read the title cards. And you aren't giving the audience time to really absorb what is going on. And when you're working with characters that don't speak, you really need to build that extra time for the audience to take in the visuals and visual cues.

Good start though! Keep it up!

Dragonmaster245 responds:

Thank you for your feedback. I’ll keep it in mind for the future.

[Ghosts]

Ya heart's in fakk'd!

I can't understand German, but even I got that one. Nice work!

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep4]

How dare you. I actually had my hopes up. Damn this fine month of April.

[all yor base r blong 2 us]

There is something really special about finding a meme like this in it's original form. I know it's on Youtube, but finding it here is just....special. Thank you for giving birth to so many wonderful memes in-jokes and internet moments.

[Magical Dream Bed]

I mean, I was waiting for it to turn cynical.... I got what I expected. I just didn't expect it to go so fast.

[1010100]

It takes a bit of time for it to get rolling. But once it does get rolling it's fairly interesting. I think part of the problem is that it was hard to see some of what was being drawn until the projection kicked in. Still, it was unique, and worth the watch.

[NWAR: Cold Open]

The puns! The puns! Great work. The artifacts you added to make the animation look aged really added a lot to the overall style. Nice work!

[Ducks]

Videos like this are a lost art. I don't know what I was expecting but I laughed several times anyway. Good work.

[Gwain Saga - Chapter 001]

Some of the pokemon music was distracting, and I think the shade of pink you used on the girl is way too close to her skin tone in some shots. That said, the concept (while not the most original thing in the world) is definitely well executed. The animated comic book style is really clever. The animation style is also very cute. I could see this getting adapted into a really clever video game.