The aesthetic and concept are good. But you need to leave more time between transitions. I don't have enough time to read the title cards. And you aren't giving the audience time to really absorb what is going on. And when you're working with characters that don't speak, you really need to build that extra time for the audience to take in the visuals and visual cues.
Good start though! Keep it up!
Thank you for your feedback. I’ll keep it in mind for the future.
Ya heart's in fakk'd!
I can't understand German, but even I got that one. Nice work!
How dare you. I actually had my hopes up. Damn this fine month of April.
Nice rant animation. I might work on the audio though. I can hardly hear it. And that's a bit distracting. Otherwise, nice work!
Thank you for your feedback :)
I will use this information!
There is something really special about finding a meme like this in it's original form. I know it's on Youtube, but finding it here is just....special. Thank you for giving birth to so many wonderful memes in-jokes and internet moments.
I mean, I was waiting for it to turn cynical.... I got what I expected. I just didn't expect it to go so fast.
Holy crap. This is really good. This kind of animation would be on par with that one Arctic Monkeys music video. You should seriously consider making a full music video in this style. I don't know if you have training or not, but you have mad talent.
Hey thanks! You can find the full music video at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63X1PfVQDu0
It takes a bit of time for it to get rolling. But once it does get rolling it's fairly interesting. I think part of the problem is that it was hard to see some of what was being drawn until the projection kicked in. Still, it was unique, and worth the watch.
The puns! The puns! Great work. The artifacts you added to make the animation look aged really added a lot to the overall style. Nice work!
Videos like this are a lost art. I don't know what I was expecting but I laughed several times anyway. Good work.
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